Roaming Shadow

My critiques are normally done straight through the peice. Every time I come across something that catches my attention, such as grammer, I make a not of it in the ...

((Interesting idea. Certainly adds an odd little twist to it.)) "Hey, this is Alex Terral. You left a message on my voice mail and I think you may have had ...

Combination of what Snoink and aeroman said. I often do a lot of random daydreaming, and I get a lot of cool stuff out of it. 95% of those thoughts ...

I feel sadness, and grief, but I rarely cry. ~Hunter I wouldn't say "a lot", but I'm not afraid to cry and I'm not ashamed to admitt it. ~Alex There ...

RoxanneR, when it come to beginnings, I feel your pain. Actually, you desrcibed one of my own works pretty well in that second sentance. Once I get the ball rolling, ...

Hey, enemy becomming ally isn't necessarily a bad thing. That's what's helped many stories before. However, if your lead villian is your only real villian and he switches sides, then ...

I'm not sure of the last time I needed to. ~Hunter Good question. That's one of those trivial facts I don't know, and really don't care about. No offense. ~Alex ...

Power. ~Hunter Peace and tranquility. ~Leona Wet. ~Alex Change. ~Diego Have you ever had your heart broken? (Not neccesarily from lost love)

Home is wherever I make it, so I am rarely not at home. ~Hunter My old friends. ~Leona To be honest, my parents. They probobly still think I'm dead, and ...

Huh, wow. I need to give myself more credit on my critiqueing abilities I guess. It seems I was more helpful than I thought. Thanks for the compliments. Chapter 2 ...

I printed off up to chapter six for critique a while ago, so if you've already worked out things I point out, I apologize. I just don't want to reprint ...

The wolf. ~Hunter Falcons, it doesn't matter the type. ~Leona The dragon, of course. ~Alex How much do you plan in comparison to improvising?

8/10. Uh, a little overly poetic for my tastes, but I totaly agree with the message. By the way, is the first part supposed to make sense?

It's a rare time when I don't feel safe. I can defend myself. And when I can't, I know how to escape. As long as my mind is clear, I ...

The king. He killed my father, and I will always have the scar to remind me. ~Hunter I don't even know his name, but I despise one man for the ...